Courtesy of Bert Witherspoon
Howdy? I then looked and saw TEXAS…makes sense!
First sentence would put me on the defensive, but that’s just me.
You know what? I really don’t like it either. I just couldn’t think of anything better at the time that I put it together. I am very open to discussion and alternatives.
No prob. How about loosing all but the last sentence in the first paragraph Also, loose the first two sentences of the last paragraph. Make sure and not start that last sentense with the word “and”, just start it with “If”.
Hope that helps.