New phonebook ad


#1

My new phone book ad for power washing. Any thoughts. I need to finalize any changes soon. Thanks,

Steve


#2

Looks good. Business card size?

You need a bigger surface cleaner. How big is that one in the picture?


#3

I would put your area code in the phone number


#4

After looking at it again, I thought I may make a few suggestions. The font of the words “Pressure Cleaning” in your logo looks a bit generic. Make it bold, use up more of that free space. I would also increase the font size of the “Fully Insured” and the points below it. A simple light background would help out the overall look of the ad as well.

After watching your video about Rain Flow, why don’t you advertise that?


#5

His ad will already be in the Power or Pressure Washing section – perhaps the space could be used for something else more compelling to readers?

Steve: Did you reread Jason’s topic regarding his ad? Lots of good replies there, yes?


#6

Thanks Larry, no I didn’t see it, I will look for it. As far as this copy goes, it is my concept of what I want. Things like the font sizes and area code will be addressed by the graphics people at the phone book company.


#7

The one in the picture is like 18" I think. WE only use it for small patios and walkways etc… It is a very handy tool. I am hoping to get a “real” one soon, but I think a WFP setup will win out over a surface cleaner for now.