Hi all. I’ve got my website to about 75% of where I want it. Check it out, let me know what you think. Feel free to tease my technique in the video; the videographer said slower and more exaggerated motions would look better so w/e.
I’ll be adding some gallery photos and a links page soon so check back if you’re interested in seeing the final product take shape.
Jumbled.
Pics are uneven.
Better spacing for each topic.
(maybe separate pages?)
Like the content, in general, though.
I didn’t watch the video, it looked like another image, at a glance.
(meaning, it blended in with the rest.)
Are you viewing on mobile or desktop?
cool wooden camel!
The grey bubble on the right hurts my eyes. I’d go with a rectangle with your services listed in bullet form, not centered.
Your logo reminds me of some low budget illuminati and the dark grey background is kinda depressing. 
Sorry if I sound harsh!
Desktop.
I will check Ipad, since you gave me the “lightbulb.”
Sorry, bout that…
No worries. I wouldn’t have asked for the attention if I was afraid of constructive criticism.
I will be revising it little by little as I can’t afford to hire a webmaster yet.
I’m viewing Mobile on android fwiw. Your site seems solid however the first page is like a shotgun blast. It hits everything all at once. I don’t have a site at all but sales is sales. If it doesn’t matter to the customer it just doesn’t matter. Seems like your biography and solution should have seperate tabs so if it matters to the customer, they can click on it. This would also allow you to elaborate on each tab more so customers could get a better feel of whether or not they can trust you or not… again it’s WAY better than I have, just seems everywhere at once. I would think the most important parts would be area of service, reviews/testimonials, some kind of " This months special" or call to action as people say, and contact info for the company.
I hear ya man. I built my own website and it shows… basically just threw together a few photoshopped pics and called it a day.
Meh, I think it looks worse…
Take the graphic that is on the right "Logo/Professional/ list of services."
Shift it left, and put your name, “proudly serving” etc… to the right.
Lose the first “before” image (it doesn’t show enough of the window.)
Keep the second.
Move both pics (before and after) somewhere that breaks up the text.
Alphe Clean Sarasota:
Why Hire The Pros?:
----- before and after shot ----
About the owner:
When I read this the first thing I imagined was putting your face on Arnold Schwarzenegger’s body, and a squeegee in his hand instead of a dumbell.
No worries.
Mine’s a jumbled mess…
But it’s easier for me to give 30 second advice, than it is for me to make the changes, myself.
Anytime I critique, I already know I should be doing the same.
(so, admitted hypocrite, but my intentions are good.) 
Well I appreciate it all the same.
Glad to hear it, because I’m genuine in what I say. 
I’m BEGGING for some time to clear my own house out.
That is SO going on my website
LOL probably cause it’s the one thing I paid someone else to do 
@Skipper @TommyD @JfromtheD @Trenchfeet
Thank you all for the help and observation. Stay tuned for V2 later this week!
