Flyer Review

Hello experts-
I printed a small run of this flyer for an event this weekend. I’m considering using this same basic design for a larger EDDM run later this fall. Do any of you experts have opinions on tweaks to this flyer? Thanks.

Id probobly lose the black and remove the word Rob. Replace it with take?. Plus can you enlarged the photos a bit?

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i like the “rabbit caught in the headlights” photo. try and include one of you cleaning too

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Im not a fan of it.
The picture of you reminds me of a realtor postcard.
Using the phrase “rob you of your time” then following that up with “I’ll do it” insinuates that your’e going to “rob” them and no one likes to be robbed.

Telling them “theyll be glad” is a little pretentious and car “salesmany”

Your name and title in big letters- to me, is overboard.

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TBH I don’t care for it either. The picture of you, IMO, should look like you when showing up on the job.

Don’t care for the marketing copy, or the layout.

The headline seems ok. Change at least a few of those pictures to show what you do (squeegee on the glass or a WFP working). Your pictures remind me of a sales ad for buying windows. P.S. REAL pictures and not stock photos are better IMO too.

P.S. put an expiration date on the coupon too. It creates a sense of urgency.

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