Hey brotha, I’ve noticed a few times that you ask for opinions and get the same answers about the cartoon characters and your cards/site being way too busy.
There’s a reason why people continue to comment about it. If your just going to defend why it’s that way, why even ask people? You already know what you want for your company and most guys here think it’s too busy for a reason.
Save the hassle and just do you.
I don’t mean it in a negative way but this has to be the 3rd or 4th thing with the same responsees from people and I don’t think you get what people are saying.
I love my kids too and what I am doing is to provide for them and I want them to grow to be a part of my business(if they so choose) but I don’t need to create it around a child’s mentality.
I personally don’t mind the window character. It’s a good touch but on 1 card you have 2 characters, way too much lettering , unorganized bubble.
It doesn’t look like a professional, adult business card. It looks like a high school kids dream. Slapped together and too much happening.
I say less colours, 1 character, smaller font, organized text and take out "/ storefront ". Residential/commercial gets to the point. And I agree on your email…I’ve mentioned it before. It’s way too long and annoying. If your not going to have the professional @squeeknsqueege.com to It, at least take out the word office and do firstname.lastname@example.org
And don’t feel bad. I slapped my logo together until I can afford it upgrade to hi def. I have lots to work on my own business as well. So don’t take it personal!!